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The Polychromatic Spectrum - Ch 2"Well, we sat down for lunch and Rainbow practically begged me to tell her what was on my mind. So, I told her, we kissed and that was that."
"You left out the part where you actually asked what this makes us," Rainbow smirkily remarked.
"Sh-Shut up! Anyway, we enjoyed the show, came back here, fell asleep, you walked in, and now here we are. Is that a good enough explanation for you, Spike?" She asked sarcastically, eyeing her number one assistant.
"Yep. So when are you guys gonna tell everyone?" Twilight and Rainbow quizzically looked at each other.
"I'unno." Rainbow stated simply.
"Anyways, I'm gonna go upstairs and give you two some privacy. Just remember that impressionable ears can hear loud noises!" Spike shouted that last part as he made up the staircase. Twilight and Rainbow giggled and dove straight into their 'business.'
Rainbow, her forelegs around Twilight's shoulders, pulled her in close and kissed her, this time more passionate than the last. Twilight winced at first, bu
Review/Rant of MLP:FiM Season 3 FinaleFor all intents and purposes, the latest episode of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic -- The season 3 finale -- was fairly good. Unlike quite a few episodes, the problem faced by the protagonists were faced with quite an intense problem, which may have even been life-threatening when you see what Rarity is doing with the weather.
The internal conflict experienced by the main protagonist, Twilight Sparkle, was portrayed rather well, which tied in with the episode's plot perfectly. Twilight screwed up, so she had to fix it. This lead to, however, a rather simple solution, and was resolved too quickly. Instead of doing what she would normally do (study), she was able to come up with a solution quickly. A little too quickly. I found the episode to be too short for the major problem that was being experienced. The phenomenon that occurred was one of the most important ones of the entire show, and yet it was resolved quicker than some of the least important dramas, such as Rarity's fiasco
REVIEW: My Little Pony - Friendship is MagicCartoons certainly have come a long way from when I was a kid. Back then we had cartoons that often sought to entertain by telling corny jokes and getting a petty laugh or two. Mind you, being a kid, it often worked. And as I've grown older and flick to Cartoon Network every now and then, cartoons just seem to be getting worse and worse. A few years back we had awesome cartoons such as Foster's Home for Imaginary friends and Camp Lazlo, and nowadays Cartoon Network only seems to have the same three episodes of the same three shows on permanent three hour repeat.
So whenever I hear about a good modern cartoon I'm always skeptical, as the only good modern cartoons I ever see are animes, which a lot of people don't even consider to be cartoons. So you could imagine my skepticism when I hear of the ever-growing popularity of Hasbro's My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.
I never understood why My Little Pony still existed in today's age. Before Friendship is Magic rolled around it was just
The Polychromatic Spectrum - Ch 1This is fanfiction for My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Also a sequel to my previous fanfiction: "Gem of My Eye."
With a downhearted expression dressing her face, Rainbow Dash watched the happy couple enjoy a laid back lunch date. She watched as they talked, laughed, and smiled. She watched as they acted like a healthy, happy couple. Rainbow Dash mentally sighed as she heard someone approaching.
"Still like her?" Twilight Sparkle asked as she approached Rainbow. "It's not just that, Twi. Look at how happy they are, and I came so close to breaking them up."
It's been two months and she's still so upset, Twilight thought. "Come with me," She began, heading in the opposite direction. "I have something for you." "Uh... Okay." Rainbow followed closely behind Twilight when they arrived at her house.
They entered, and almost instantly, a small object floated in front of her face. "Ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh. Really really really?!" Rainbow stuttered excitedly, gazing i
Gem of My Eye - Pt 6Fluttershy slowly backed away, intimidated by Rarity's outburst.
"Don't even try to justify this! Why were you kissing my marefiend?!" Rainbow glanced down, not being able to look Rarity in the eye.
"And Fluttershy, why would you kiss her? I thought you were happy! I thought we were happy!"
"No, Rarity I-" Fluttershy began.
"Save it!" Rarity turned and walked away, not looking back. Tears falling freely to the ground, Fluttershy ran.
*KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK*
"Oh, hi Flutter- wait, what's wrong?" Twilight cut herself off upon seeing the pain in the meek pegasus' eyes.
"R-Rarity left me!" The unicorn's jaw dropped. She guided Fluttershy inside, sat her down and shut the door.
"She left you? Why?" Twilight rested her hoof around Fluttershy's shoulders and wiped the tears from her face.
"S-she didn't let me explain w-when Rainbow Dash k-kissed me-"
"Rainbow Dash did WHAT?!" Twilight's yell echoed through the library as her eyes filled with rage. She settled down upon
Gem of My Eye - Pt 5"You... you what?" Twilight was in shock. She couldn't believe what had come from her friend's mouth. "S-Since when were you into mares?!"
"Twi, can we stay on topic? This is serious! I'm really scared!"
"Rainbow, there's really not much I can do! I can't help with this, you know she's with Rarity." Twilight brought a hoof to her cyan friend as she let her tears freefall.
"I know, but I can't help how I feel!"
"Rainbow, just promise me that you won't come between them."
"... Alright. I promise, Twi. I'm the Element of Loyalty, I wouldn't do anything like that." Rainbow rose from her seat and made her way over to the exit, Twilight following.
"Will you be okay? I'm always here if you need a helping hoof."
"Yeah, I'll be fine. Thanks, Twi." Rainbow dashed ahead and took off to her cloud house, leaving Twilight with a trail of dust. This must be really haunting if it can bring Rainbow Dash to tears.
Twilight gently closed the door and retreated back to her books as Spike awoke from
Gem of My Eye - Pt 4"Girls, ah got a little proposal for y'all."
"What is it, Applejack?" Rainbow Dash simply asked, the other two mares in the room remaining silent.
"Last night, after our little get together, Rarity asked me to put together their first date, like ah did for Big Mac last year." The other girls smiled.
"Ah propose that instead of it being jus' me, we should all pitch in to help the lovebirds." Applejack looked around the room to see her friends all looking at one another, grinning.
"Applejack, that's a wonderful idea!" Twilight spoke first, still smiling.
"Yeah, AJ! That sounds awesome!" Rainbow Dash remarked.
Pinkie Pie started bouncing around the room. "Sounds absolutely splendiferous!"
"Great!" Applejack replied. "We'll all need to pitch in. Ah figured mahself and Pinkie can handle the food. Twilight, you'll handle the furniture and decorations. Raindow, y'all will handle the clouds."
"Sounds like a plan," the three mares spoke in unison.
The next morning, two ponies were woken by
Gem of My Eye - Pt 3"You know, we could just go to Sugarcube Corner," Fluttershy broke the silence.
Chapter Three: Fork in the Road
"No, Pinkie Pie doesn't know yet, and she'd make a big deal over it."
"True. How about we just forget it for now and try again another time?" The pegasus looked at her marefriend with a tilt in her head.
"It's probably for the best. Fluttershy, how about we just relax for a while? We have the whole day to ourselves, after all." Rarity rose from her seat at the table.
Rarity had been racking her brain for hours on end. Yesterday went so well for her and Fluttershy, yet here they were, struggling to decide what to do for their first date.
The mares retreated to the couch and simply held each other, comforted by each other's presence.
"You know, if everypony knew about us then it would be fine to go to Sugarcube Corner," Fluttershy suggested, looking Rarity in the eye.
"Maybe we should tell everyone. But it may be too soon. We haven't even had our first date. But we can'
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